Yorkshire Sculpture Park

We had a to present our Yorkshire Sculpture Park logo's to a group talking about what we had created and we discussed each of our design decisions. My presentation went very well and I feel I talked about my work in a confident and clear way.

After each person we each wrote down notes on their presentation these are some examples of what the group thought of my work.

'Some good research into Pompidou logo although would be beneficial to look at a broader range of research.' 

'Good design development and critiquing of designs.'

'Good appreciation of scale.'

'Try and experiment with more simplified shapes from drawings to show it works in different shapes.'

'Looking at established, successful logos to influence and inform your practice was good, considered design decisions. Really detailed design process throughout.'

'Good background research, great ideas, lots of development- Great drawings! Too intricate/ detailed would get lost in small scale.'

'Good versatility with the simple from far but detailed from close up.'

Overall the feed back was very positive but I feel I could have been more constructive to have some more constructive criticism just to try and improve my work in the future. I think the main thing that was spoke about was if the logo could work on a both a large and small scale. I found this kind of feed back very useful and I think doing this more regularly will definitely improve my practice and ability to self criticise my work.